[lfs-fr] r4680 - trunk/blfs/traduc/commits

myou72 at orange.fr myou72 at orange.fr
Jeu 3 Oct 10:08:35 PDT 2013


Author: myou72
Date: 2013-10-03 19:08:35 +0200 (Thu, 03 Oct 2013)
New Revision: 4680

Modified:
   trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r10.txt
   trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r55.txt
   trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r7.txt
Log:
[BLFS-EN] r55.txt

Modified: trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r10.txt
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--- trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r10.txt	2013-10-03 17:08:14 UTC (rev 4679)
+++ trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r10.txt	2013-10-03 17:08:35 UTC (rev 4680)
@@ -1 +0,0 @@
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Modified: trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r55.txt
===================================================================
--- trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r55.txt	2013-10-03 17:08:14 UTC (rev 4679)
+++ trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r55.txt	2013-10-03 17:08:35 UTC (rev 4680)
@@ -0,0 +1,390 @@
+Révision 7
+
+Log :
+continue ent and intro updates, consistency changes
+
+Le robot a traité 16 % du commit anglais
+Index: introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
+===================================================================
+--- introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	(révision 43)
++++ introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	(révision 44)
+@@ -10,6 +10,9 @@
+ 
+ <itemizedlist>
+ 
++<listitem><para>July 30th, 2002 [larry]:  Multimedia: modified intro for
++xmms for links.</para></listitem>
++
+ <listitem><para>July 22nd, 2002 [bdubbs]: Deleted duplicate define in 
+ xfree86 hosts.def file.</para></listitem>
+ 
+Index: multimedia/audioutils/xmms/xmms.ent
+===================================================================
+--- multimedia/audioutils/xmms/xmms.ent	(révision 43)
++++ multimedia/audioutils/xmms/xmms.ent	(révision 44)
+@@ -4,7 +4,8 @@
+ <!ENTITY XMMS-exp SYSTEM "XMMS-exp.xml">
+ <!ENTITY XMMS-desc SYSTEM "XMMS-desc.xml">
+ <!ENTITY XMMS-config SYSTEM "XMMS-config.xml">
+-<!ENTITY XMMS-buildsize "NOT KNOWN">
++<!ENTITY XMMS-buildsize "17 MB">
+ <!ENTITY XMMS-version "1.2.7">
+-<!ENTITY XMMS-download "ftp://ftp.xmms.org/xmms/1.2.x/xmms-1.2.7.tar.bz2">
+-<!ENTITY XMMS-size "1.7 MB">
++<!ENTITY XMMS-download-http "http://www.xmms.org/files/1.2.x/xmms-1.2.7.tar.bz2">
++<!ENTITY XMMS-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.xmms.org/xmms/1.2.x/xmms-1.2.7.tar.bz2">
++<!ENTITY XMMS-size "11 MB">
+Index: multimedia/audioutils/xmms/XMMS-intro.xml
+===================================================================
+--- multimedia/audioutils/xmms/XMMS-intro.xml	(révision 43)
++++ multimedia/audioutils/xmms/XMMS-intro.xml	(révision 44)
+@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
+ <sect2>
+ <title>Introduction to XMMS</title>
+ 
+-<screen>Download location:              &XMMS-download;
++<screen>Download location (HTTP):       <ulink url="&XMMS-download-http;"/>
++Download location (FTP):        <ulink url="&XMMS-download-ftp;"/>
+ Version used:                   &XMMS-version;
+ Package size:                   &XMMS-size;
+ Estimated Disk space required:  &XMMS-buildsize;</screen>
+@@ -9,7 +10,8 @@
+ <para>XMMS is an audio player for the X Window System. </para>
+ 
+ <screen>XMMS depends on:
+-a working soundcard, x11, gtk, glib
+-XMMS will utilize esd, gnome, libmikmod, libogg, libvorbis and libxml if
++a working soundcard, <xref linkend="xfree86"/>, <xref linkend="GTK"/> and <xref linkend="GLib"/>
++XMMS will utilize esd, gnome, libmikmod, <xref linkend="libogg"/>, <xref
++linkend="libvorbis"/> and <xref linkend="libxml"/> if
+ installed prior to XMMS.</screen>
+ </sect2>
+Index: index.xml
+===================================================================
+--- index.xml	(révision 43)
++++ index.xml	(révision 44)
+@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
+ <!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.1.2//EN" 
+ 			"/usr/share/docbook/docbookx.dtd" [
+ 
+-<!ENTITY version "20020722">
+-<!ENTITY releasedate "July 22nd, 2002">
++<!ENTITY version "20020730">
++<!ENTITY releasedate "July 30th, 2002">
+ 
+ <!ENTITY % book SYSTEM "book/book.ent">
+ <!ENTITY % preface SYSTEM "preface/preface.ent">
+Index: server/mail/postfix/postfix-config.xml
+===================================================================
+--- server/mail/postfix/postfix-config.xml	(révision 43)
++++ server/mail/postfix/postfix-config.xml	(révision 44)
+@@ -58,17 +58,17 @@
+ case "$1" in
+ 
+         start)
+-        echo "Starting Mail Service..."
++        echo "Starting Postfix..."
+         loadproc postfix start
+         ;;
+ 
+         stop)
+-        echo "Stopping Mail Service..."
++        echo "Stopping Postfix..."
+         loadproc postfix stop
+         ;;
+ 		
+         reload)
+-        echo "Reloading Mail Service..."
++        echo "Reloading Postfix..."
+         loadproc postfix reload
+         ;;
+ 
+Index: x/installing/dri.xml
+===================================================================
+--- x/installing/dri.xml	(révision 43)
++++ x/installing/dri.xml	(révision 44)
+@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
+             
+ <para>Now update the <filename>host.def</filename> file. The only change 
+ necessary is to uncomment the <parameter>BuildXF86DRM</parameter> define.
+-Sinece DRI is still in Beta, changing the optimizations is not recommended.
++Since DRI is still in Beta, changing the optimizations is not recommended.
+ </para>
+ <para>
+ If you do not want to build all the drivers, change 
+on "3.1.2">
++<!ENTITY ncftp-download-http "">
++<!ENTITY ncftp-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.ncftp.com/ncftp/ncftp-3.1.2-src.tar.bz2">
+ <!ENTITY ncftp-size "378 KB">
+
+Index: basicnet/netprogs/ncftp/ncftp-intro.xml
+===================================================================
+--- basicnet/netprogs/ncftp/ncftp-intro.xml	(révision 54)
++++ basicnet/netprogs/ncftp/ncftp-intro.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
+ <sect2>
+ <title>Introduction to ncftp</title>
+ 
+-<screen>Download location:              &ncftp-download;
++<screen>Download location (HTTP):        <ulink url="&ncftp-download-http;"/>
++Download location (FTP):        <ulink url="&ncftp-download-ftp;"/>
+ Version used:                   &ncftp-version;
+ Package size:                   &ncftp-size;
+ Estimated Disk space required:  &ncftp-buildsize;</screen>
+
+Index: basicnet/netprogs/openssh-client.xml
+===================================================================
+--- basicnet/netprogs/openssh-client.xml	(révision 54)
++++ basicnet/netprogs/openssh-client.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
+ <sect1 id="basicnet-netprogs-openssh">
+ <?dbhtml filename="openssh.html" dir="basicnet"?>
+-<title>The OpenSSH-&openssh-version; client</title>
+<title>OpenSSH-&openssh-version; client</title>
+ 
+ <para>The ssh client is a secure replacement for telnet.  If you want to
+-install it, the instructions can be found in Chapter 09 - <xref
++install it, the instructions can be found in Chapter 23 - <xref
+ linkend="openssh"/>.  Note that if you only want to use the client, you
+ do <emphasis>not</emphasis> need to run the server and so do not need
+ the startup script and links.  In accordance with good practice, only
+
+Index: basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute.ent
+===================================================================
+--- basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute.ent	(révision 54)
++++ basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute.ent	(révision 55)
+@@ -5,5 +5,6 @@
+ <!ENTITY traceroute-desc SYSTEM "traceroute-desc.xml">
+ <!ENTITY traceroute-buildsize "75 KB">
+ <!ENTITY traceroute-version "1.4a12">
++<!ENTITY traceroute-download-http "">
++<!ENTITY traceroute-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.ee.lbl.gov/traceroute.tar.gz">
+ <!ENTITY traceroute-size "35 KB">
+
+Index: basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-intro.xml
+===================================================================
+--- basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-intro.xml	(révision 54)
++++ basicnet/netutils/traceroute/traceroute-intro.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
+ <sect2>
+ <title>Introduction to traceroute</title>
+ 
+-<screen>Download location:              &traceroute-download; 
+<screen>Download location (HTTP):       <ulink url="&traceroute-download-http;"/>
+Download location (FTP):        <ulink url="&traceroute-download-ftp;"/>
+ Version used:                   &traceroute-version;
+@@ -11,7 +12,4 @@
+ is a standard network troubleshooting tool. If you find yourself unable to 
+ connect to another system, traceroute can help pinpoint the problem.</para>
+ 
+-<screen>Traceroute does not depend on any packages that are not a part of 
+-the base LFS system.</screen>
+ </sect2>
+
+Index: connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml
+===================================================================
+--- connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml	(révision 54)
++++ connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
+ <sect1 id="connect-dhcp-client">
+ <?dbhtml filename="dhcpclient.html" dir="connect"?>
+-<title>Installing dhcp-&dhcp-version;</title>
++<title>dhcp-&dhcp-version;</title>
+ 
+ <para>The dhcp package comes with both a client and a server program for
+ using DHCP.  If you want to install it, the instructions can be found
+
+Index: content/databases/db/db.ent
+===================================================================
+--- content/databases/db/db.ent	(révision 54)
++++ content/databases/db/db.ent	(révision 55)
+@@ -6,5 +6,6 @@
+ <!ENTITY db-config SYSTEM "db-config.xml">
+ <!ENTITY db-buildsize "23 MB">
+ <!ENTITY db-version "4.0.14">
+-<!ENTITY db-download "http://www.sleepycat.com/update/snapshot/db-4.0.14.tar.gz">
++<!ENTITY db-download-http "http://www.sleepycat.com/update/snapshot/db-4.0.14.tar.gz">
++<!ENTITY db-download-ftp "">
+ <!ENTITY db-size "2.6 MB">
+
+Index: content/databases/db/db-intro.xml
+===================================================================
+--- content/databases/db/db-intro.xml	(révision 54)
++++ content/databases/db/db-intro.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
+ <sect2>
+ <title>Introduction to db</title>
+ 
+-<screen>Download location:              &db-download;
++<screen>Download location (HTTP):       <ulink url="&db-download-http;"/>
++Download location (FTP):        <ulink url="&db-download-ftp;"/>
+ Version used:                   &db-version;
+ Package size:                   &db-size;
+ Estimated Disk space required:  &db-buildsize;</screen>
+
+Index: general/sysutils/which.xml
+===================================================================
+--- general/sysutils/which.xml	(révision 54)
++++ general/sysutils/which.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
+ <sect1 id="which" xreflabel="which-&which-version;">
+ <?dbhtml filename="which.html" dir="general"?>
+-<title>The "which" program / script</title>
++<title>which-&which-version; and alternatives</title>
+ 
+ <para>The presence / absence of the which program in the main LFS book
+ is probably one of the most contentious issues we have on the mailing
+
+Index: index.xml
+===================================================================
+--- index.xml	(révision 54)
++++ index.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
+ <!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.1.2//EN" 
+ 			"/usr/share/docbook/docbookx.dtd" [
+ 
+-<!ENTITY version "20020803">
+-<!ENTITY releasedate "August 3rd, 2002">
++<!ENTITY version "20020804">
++<!ENTITY releasedate "August 4th, 2002">
+ 
+ <!ENTITY % book SYSTEM "book/book.ent">
+ <!ENTITY % preface SYSTEM "preface/preface.ent">
+Index: introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
+===================================================================
+--- introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	(révision 54)
++++ introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -10,6 +10,10 @@
+ 
+ <itemizedlist>
+ 
++<listitem><para>August 4th, 2002 [larry]: Basic Networking: Update ent
++and intro files to new format.  Server Networking: Update ent and intro
++files to new format.</para></listitem>
+ <listitem><para>August 3rd, 2002 [larry]: General: added
+ bc-1.06.</para></listitem>
+ 
+
+Index: postlfs/config/logon.xml
+===================================================================
+--- postlfs/config/logon.xml	(révision 54)
++++ postlfs/config/logon.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
+ <sect1 id="postlfs-config-logon">
+ <?dbhtml filename="logon.html" dir="postlfs"?>
+-<title>Customising your logon (/etc/issue)</title>
++<title>/etc/issue (Customising your logon)</title>
+ 
+ <para>When you first boot up your new LFS system, the logon screen will
+ be nice and plain (as it should be in a bare-bones system).  Many people
+
+Index: postlfs/security/iptables/iptables.ent
+===================================================================
+--- postlfs/security/iptables/iptables.ent	(révision 54)
++++ postlfs/security/iptables/iptables.ent	(révision 55)
+@@ -5,5 +5,6 @@
+ <!ENTITY iptables-desc SYSTEM "iptables-desc.xml">
+ <!ENTITY iptables-buildsize "approximately 3.0 MB">
+ <!ENTITY iptables-version "1.2.5">
+-<!ENTITY iptables-download "http://www.iptables.org/files/iptables-1.2.5.tar.bz2">
++<!ENTITY iptables-download-http "http://www.iptables.org/files/iptables-1.2.5.tar.bz2">
++<!ENTITY iptables-download-ftp "">
+ <!ENTITY iptables-size "236 KB">
+
+Index: postlfs/security/iptables/iptables-intro.xml
+===================================================================
+--- postlfs/security/iptables/iptables-intro.xml	(révision 54)
++++ postlfs/security/iptables/iptables-intro.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
+ <sect2>
+ <title>Introduction to iptables</title>
+ 
+-<screen>Download location:		&iptables-download;
++<screen>Download location (HTTP):       <ulink url="&iptables-download-http;"/>
++Download location (FTP):        <ulink url="&iptables-download-ftp;"/>
+ Version used:			&iptables-version;
+ Package size:			&iptables-size;
+ Estimated Disk space required:	&iptables-buildsize;</screen>
+
+Index: postlfs/security/iptables.xml
+===================================================================
+--- postlfs/security/iptables.xml	(révision 54)
++++ postlfs/security/iptables.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
+ <sect1 id="postlfs-security-iptables">
+ <?dbhtml filename="iptables.html" dir="postlfs"?>
+-<title>Installing iptables-&iptables-version;</title>
++<title>iptables-&iptables-version;</title>
+ 
+ <para>The next part of this chapter deals with firewalling.  The
+ principle firewalling tool for Linux, as of the 2.4 kernel series, is
+
+Index: server/mail/postfix/postfix.ent
+===================================================================
+--- server/mail/postfix/postfix.ent	(révision 54)
++++ server/mail/postfix/postfix.ent	(révision 55)
+@@ -5,5 +5,6 @@
+ <!ENTITY postfix-config SYSTEM "postfix-config.xml">
+ <!ENTITY postfix-buildsize "47 MB">
+ <!ENTITY postfix-version "1.1.11">
+-<!ENTITY postfix-download "ftp://ftp.porcupine.org/mirrors/postfix-release/official/postfix-1.1.11.tar.gz">
++<!ENTITY postfix-download-http "">
++<!ENTITY postfix-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.porcupine.org/mirrors/postfix-release/official/postfix-1.1.11.tar.gz">
+ <!ENTITY postfix-size "1.2 MB">
+
+Index: server/mail/postfix/postfix-intro.xml
+===================================================================
+--- server/mail/postfix/postfix-intro.xml	(révision 54)
++++ server/mail/postfix/postfix-intro.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
+ <sect2>
+ <title>Introduction to postfix</title>
+ 
+-<screen>Download location:              <ulink url="&postfix-download;"/>
++<screen>Download location (HTTP):       <ulink url="&postfix-download-http;"/>
++Download location (FTP):        <ulink url="&postfix-download-ftp;"/>
+ Version used:                   &postfix-version;
+ Package size:                   &postfix-size;
+ Estimated Disk space required:  &postfix-buildsize;</screen>
+
+Index: server/other/dhcp/dhcp.ent
+===================================================================
+--- server/other/dhcp/dhcp.ent	(révision 54)
++++ server/other/dhcp/dhcp.ent	(révision 55)
+@@ -8,5 +8,6 @@
+ <!ENTITY dhcp-config SYSTEM "dhcp-config.xml">
+ <!ENTITY dhcp-buildsize "23 MB">
+ <!ENTITY dhcp-version "3.0pl1">
+-<!ENTITY dhcp-download "ftp://ftp.isc.org/isc/dhcp/dhcp-3.0pl1.tar.gz">
++<!ENTITY dhcp-download-http "">
++<!ENTITY dhcp-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.isc.org/isc/dhcp/dhcp-3.0pl1.tar.gz">
+ <!ENTITY dhcp-size "845 KB">
+
+Index: server/other/openssh/openssh.ent
+===================================================================
+--- server/other/openssh/openssh.ent	(révision 54)
++++ server/other/openssh/openssh.ent	(révision 55)
+@@ -6,5 +6,6 @@
+ <!ENTITY openssh-config SYSTEM "openssh-config.xml">
+ <!ENTITY openssh-buildsize "7.9 MB">
+ <!ENTITY openssh-version "3.4p1">
+-<!ENTITY openssh-download "ftp://ftp.openbsd.org/pub/OpenBSD/OpenSSH/portable/openssh-3.4p1.tar.gz">
+<!ENTITY openssh-download-http "">
+<!ENTITY openssh-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.openbsd.org/pub/OpenBSD/OpenSSH/portable/openssh-3.4p1.tar.gz">
+ <!ENTITY openssh-size "816 KB">
+
+Index: server/other/openssh/openssh-intro.xml
+===================================================================
+--- server/other/openssh/openssh-intro.xml	(révision 54)
++++ server/other/openssh/openssh-intro.xml	(révision 55)
+@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
+ <sect2>
+ <title>Introduction to OpenSSH</title>
+ 
+-<screen>Download location:              <ulink url="&openssh-download;"/>
++<screen>Download location (HTTP):       <ulink url="&openssh-download-http;"/>
++Download location (FTP):        <ulink url="&openssh-download-ftp;"/>
+ Version used:                   &openssh-version;
+ Package size:                   &openssh-size;
+ Estimated Disk space required:  &openssh-buildsize;</screen>
+

Modified: trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r7.txt
===================================================================
--- trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r7.txt	2013-10-03 17:08:14 UTC (rev 4679)
+++ trunk/blfs/traduc/commits/r7.txt	2013-10-03 17:08:35 UTC (rev 4680)
@@ -1,15 +0,0 @@
-Révision 10
-
-fichiers modifiés :
-M       edguide/index.xml
-M       edguide/chapter04/updatechangelog.xml
-M       edguide/chapter04/updateindex.xml
-M       edguide/chapter04/checkfiles.xml
-M       edguide/chapter04/updatecredits.xml
-M       edguide/chapter04/introduction.xml
-M       edguide/chapter04/commit.xml
-
-Log :
-
-
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