Typos and Phrasing

Peter Ennis peterennis at yahoo.com
Sun Apr 24 14:33:08 PDT 2005


Tony Morgan wrote:
>I find both the original and Peter's change to be poor 
>grammar/structure. I would suggest one of the following:
>
>s/(see the Section 1.3, “Resources” section of this book)/(see the 
>"Section 1.3. Resources" section of this book)/

Definitely an improvement :-)

How about:

s/(see the Section 1.3, “Resources” section of this book)/(refer to 
"Section 1.3. Resources" of this book)/

'section' is used only one time.







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