grammar section 7.4

Jeremy Huntwork jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon Apr 11 07:13:36 PDT 2005


Allard Welter wrote:
> Section 7.4, last sentence (grammar and spelling):
> 
> in negligable -> is negligible
 >
> Section 7.4.1, second paragraph (tense):
> 
> Last two sentences should be past tense again (from: The devfs file 
> system also suffers from race ...) unless of course these problems are 
> still manifest in the present implementation in which case it reads a 
> little odd.
> 
> Whole section 7.4: The overall impression I have is that the book is 
> written in the impersonal. All of a sudden section 7.4 goes to third 
> person (and second). Not that I have anything against the more personal 
> approach, just pointing out an inconsistency.

Thanks for the feedback, will keep this one in mind on the next edit.

--
Jeremy H.



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